Learning Goal: I’m working on a writing question and need an explanation to help

Learning Goal: I’m working on a writing question and need an explanation to help me learn.Select a sentence from any of your own prior writing that could be made more concise. This could be writing you have submitted or posted in discussions in this class or it could be from another context.Post the original sentence.
Revise the sentence to make it more concise. Be sure to indicate your revisions in bold type.
Using what you have learned about the functions of commas, demonstrate informed and deliberate choices about comma use in your revised sentence.
Demonstrate the grammar and writing skills covered in previous weeks.
Requirements: answered

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